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My mouse, wip by ashkey

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First of all, I just want to comment on how good your animation skills and movement judgements are. I mean, seriously, give yourself some credit, this is really phenomenal. The movement of the forelegs and the chest are probably the best part of this. I would say to probably add more wave to the tail...I can't really picture a cat walking with his tail so stiff and only the tip twitching. Also, for some reason, it seems as if something about the walk isn't quite right. Perhaps you could have added a little bit more movement to the mid-body section of the cat? Ugh, I can't quite put my finger on it. But ANYWHO, this is truly amazing! I can't wait to see more from you!
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ashkey Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thank you very much for critiquing! <3
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